Assuming in your neighbourhood there is a death in the next two door.You are already make a preparation to a party.Everything had been ordered.Would you still carry on the party?.What would you do?
In our opinion,we will not continue the party.It is because we respect the funeral in our neighbourhood, whether it is a man with honor or just a fishmonger. As a neighbour,we need to be tolerate to each other because we live in a community.Besides that, we also think if we carry on this party it will hurt the other feelings.This is due to the different types of races and religions in our residents.We have to be more considerate with others either they are our relatives or anybody that are not in a relation with us.More than that,we also think that this action is a must as we need to be more understanding.This is very important because to maintain the relationship between the neighbours. To be more accurate, try to put ourselves in their shoes, so we will know how's that feels. For sure we will feel neglected, because of the neighbour is just being disrespectful to us when we are in sorrow and sad mood.So,in conclusion,if we want the others respect us, we need to respect them first.
I do agree with your opinion. But, respecting death does not only comes when there is death in your neighborhood. Respect should be given to death no matter where it occurs.
ReplyDeleteI also found some grammar errors form this text.
'we are respect to the funeral in our neighbourhood'
i think you should write like this "we have to respect the funeral in our neighborhood" and you check your spelling too.
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ReplyDeleteWe're not very good in sentences' structure but in our opinion, you have several sentences' structure problems. You better work on it. Keep up your good effort in writing! =)
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